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Submitted: July 10, 2006
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Make: FUJIFILM
Model: FinePix S5200
Shutter Speed: 1/261 second
F Number: F/3.2
Focal Length: 6 mm
ISO Speed: 200
Date Picture Taken: Jul 10, 2006, 4:37:57 PM

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The contest describes to create something beautiful out of something ugly. To me, something beautiful is something strong, opinionated, and shows the truth of the world. The truth, that is true beauty. War however, is ugly.. Everyday I see this and that about Iraq. Another car bombing, another rape, another death of innocent people. Ugly is the perfect description as well for George W. Bush. He is ugly inside and out. He is supposed to be a leader, but all he has done is lead moths to a flame... I could go on forever, but it's unnecessary.

This I created with printed out articles and a wanted poster made of George. W. Bush. As well, I took articles from a newspaper and off the internet and using water glued it to my face. It's my message, it should be written all over my face, it should be shown for people to see. The background is cardboard, and the speech bubble was also made out of a piece of cardboard.

This is only one version that I manipulated, I think I might submit the other one and see which one is liked the most because I can't decide, please tell me what you truly honestly think.

^^ Go ahead and flame, I welcome it. As well, please fullview.. some of the articles were very sad..

This is the second version of War is UGLY. Please tell me which version you like best!
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I like this version more. The monochromatic grey scale of the piece emphasizes the destruction of war. I just think this is amazing, it's so powerful. Also, your eye peaking through all the articles was like the innocence of all that is destroyed, but it was also like a ray of hope.

In the other version, the position of your head seemed a little forced. This is natural and just perfect.

I'm so behind you on this one!

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Question. Learn. Grow. :+favlove:
i effing love it!! right on and all that jazz. a beautiful depiction.

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truth lies in silence with fear in our teeth.

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Hmm.. I like this one two. I like the facial expression abit more her, I'm not quite sure why but the combination of a 3/4 view and the way the eyes are slanted just such. Hmm...

I also like the background, just near the face, I'm not sure what it is but it's completely adds to the overall effect.

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"Don't get me wrong, I like furries. They're some of my best customers.... They pay cash." - Random Person at Geekkon.
Thank you so much! Your comments really helped me. Not only you said that the position was forced on the other one, and now it seems a lot clearer that this is the better version. Thanks! :hug:
Oh yes, the background! I didn't explain that, but I scanned some angry pen scribbles and edited it behind the face. Just thought it would be cool, glad you noticed. ^^
Gorgeous job!

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I have always tried to design things that are unapologetically beautiful, and I don't think there's anything wrong with that. If I can inspire an appreciation for grace and elegance, that would be the ultimate fulfillment of my life's ambition.
:D No problem.

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I have always tried to design things that are unapologetically beautiful, and I don't think there's anything wrong with that. If I can inspire an appreciation for grace and elegance, that would be the ultimate fulfillment of my life's ambition.
I must say that I very much like this. The face with news clippings over it is especially well done and is an interesting concept.

Excellent work.

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